For my second choice I picked the first major writing assignment that we were assigned to write. We were asked to write a descriptive story. It had to contain a dominant impression and a strong sensory detail. It was written the week of January 15th. It was a story about my favorite place to go in the summer. It was a story with strong sensory description.
I believe I was able to make the reader know and feel how it felt to be there. For example, "as we anchored and stepped from the boat, we felt the wooden dock creak and sway under our feet." If someone tried hard enough they could close their eyes and not only see but could possibly smell the ocean.
I hope you enjoy reading the story as much as I enjoyed writing it and being there.
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